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名师谈高考·备考与冲刺③|英语写作训练旨在弹无虚发
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2023-03-02 10:18:28
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【主持人】科教新报全媒体记者 王燕

【本期名师】  何灵芝  长沙市明德中学英语学科中心主任,长沙市何灵芝中学英语名师工作室首席,长沙市信息技术与英语融合团队核心专家,长沙市人民政府督学。

高考前冲刺阶段,除了常规阅读保持英语语感之外,写作训练尤为必要。考前梳理必备“母句”,反复操练,扩写,面批,直至炉火纯青,信手拈来。

母句一:倒装

1. Here comes the introduction of the activities. 提纲挈领时使用

2. Not only has reading incredibly enlarged my knowledge, it also has got me enthusiastic about history. 做总结时使用

3. Challenging as it may be, it helps…  辩证的总结时使用

4. Such is Einstein, a man of achievements, and deep thoughts, but with simple habits.

5. Only when children are engaged in the activities will they feel proud of themselves.

6. One day, Naomi received an email. Attached was a recording, a recording of loss and love, of the fight. Steve called it "Melanchory Flower."

母句二:主句+状语(adj.短语/ with短语/ 独立主格结构/ -ed短语/ -ing短语等)

1. Cold, hungry and alone, I looked at the miserable garden and wondered about my future here.

2. Mr. Mason drooped in a chair, white-faced, with his eyes closed.

3. Elephants were eating grass, ears flapping lazily as they moved slowly over the plains.

4. He crouched down on his belly, wagging his tail and making peace signs.

5. Bathed in the sunshine and delighted by fantastic scenery, we headed for the destination.

母句三:无灵主语

1. A moisture came into his eyes, and, as the whipping continued, he arose and walked irresolutely up and down.

2. The angry sky roared, throwing lightning around.

3. As time ticked by, fear crept upon my heart.

4. Anxiety tore him into pieces.

5. Recent years have witnessed a growing social mobility.

母句四:分隔结构

1. Mitch Prinstein, a professor of clinical psychology, sorts the popular into two categories: the likable and the status seekers. (同位语主谓分隔)

2. The most vital thing, if you want to make your speech perfectly understood, is that you’d better base it on Chinese culture. (状语从句主谓分隔)

3. The difficulties, to my relief, were all overcome in the end. (介词短语主谓分隔)

母句五:副词加强语气

1. usually, frequently, constantly, occasionally, continuously, repeatedly,(频率副词)

2. seldom, never, rarely, hardly, scarcely (否定副词)

3. actually, basically, definitely, entirely, completely, absolutely, incredibly (程度副词)

4. more importantly, admittedly, accordingly, still, nevertheless (逻辑副词)

另外,读后续写中对同学们“读懂”和“会写”能力的考查,需要从文本主要风格、主要人物、主要线索、主题四个方面入手,展开思路,根据段首句关键信息提问,从阅读文本找伏笔,心中有4C标准即Complete(故事完整), Coherent(衔接连贯), Correct(语法准确) 和 Creative(句式丰富)。近年高考真题如下:

从表格可见,体现师生情,友情,亲情的紧密贴近学生实际生活的趣事为永恒不变的主题,所以同学们可以从这几个方面有意识地注重积累、仿写和面批,知己知彼,定能百战百胜。

责编:王燕

一审:王燕

二审:黄维

三审:王明辉

来源:科教新报

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